Writing
Successful Scholarship Essays-
Step Two: Selecting an Essay Topic
Having
completed step one, you should now have a rough idea of the elements
you wish to include in your scholarship essay, including your goals,
important life experiences, research experience, diversifying
features, spectacular nonacademic accomplishments, financial need,
etc. You should also now have an idea of what impression you want to
make on the scholarship committee.
You
must now consider topics that will allow you to synthesize your
important personal characteristics and experiences into a coherent
whole. While most scholarship essays allow great latitude in topic
selection, you must also be sure to answer the questions that were
asked of you. Leaving a lasting impression on someone who reads 50
essays a day will not be easy, but we have compiled some guidelines to
help you get started.
Consider
the following questions before proceeding:
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Have
you selected a topic that describes something of personal
importance in your life, with which you can use vivid personal
experiences as supporting details?
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Is your topic a
gimmick? That is, do you plan to write your essay in iambic
pentameter or make it funny. You should be very, very careful if
you are planning to do this. We recommend strongly that you do
not do this. Almost always, this is done poorly and is not
appreciated by the scholarship committee unless a creative
approach is explicitly recommended. Nothing is worse than not
laughing or not being amused at something that was written to be
funny or amusing.
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Will your topic only
repeat information listed elsewhere on your application? If so,
pick a new topic. Don’t mention GPAs or standardized test
scores in your essay if they are mentioned elsewhere.
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Can you offer vivid
supporting paragraphs to your essay topic? If you cannot easily
think of supporting paragraphs with concrete examples, you
should probably choose a different essay topic.
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Can you fully answer
the question asked of you? Can you address and elaborate on all
points within the specified word limit? If you plan on writing
about something technical, make sure you truly can back up your
interest in a topic and are not merely throwing around big
scientific words. Unless you convince the reader that you
actually have the life experiences to back up your interest in
neurobiology, the reader will assume you are trying to impress
him/her with shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write to the
scholarship officers and that you are not writing over their
heads.
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Can you keep the
reader's interest from the first word. The entire essay must be
interesting, considering scholarship officers will probably only
spend a few minutes reading each essay.
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Is your topic
overdone? To ascertain this, peruse through old essays.
EssayEdge's 100 free application essays can help you do this.
However, most topics are overdone, and this is not a bad thing.
A unique or convincing answer to a classic topic can pay off
big.
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Will your topic
turnoff a large number of people? If you write on how everyone
should worship your God, how wrong or right abortion is, or how
you think the Republican or Democratic Party is evil, you will
not win the scholarship or aid award. The only thing worse than
not writing a memorable essay is writing an essay that will be
remembered negatively. Stay away from specific religions,
political doctrines, or controversial opinions. You can still
write an essay about Nietzsche's influence on your life, but
express understanding that not all intelligent people will agree
with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize instead Nietzsche's influence
on your life, and not why you think he was wrong or right
in his claims.
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In this vein, if you
are presenting a topic that is controversial, you must
acknowledge counter arguments without sounding arrogant.
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Will a scholarship
officer remember your topic after a day of reading hundreds of
essays? What will the officer remember about your topic? What
will the officer remember about you? What will your lasting
impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with the above criteria and
asking for the free opinions of your teachers or colleagues, and of
your friends, you should have at least 1-2 interesting essay topics.
Consider the following guidelines below.
1. If you are planning on writing an essay on how you
survived poverty in Russia, your mother's suicide, your father's
kidnapping, or your immigration to America from Asia, you should be
careful that your main goal is to address your own personal
qualities. Just because something sad or horrible has happened to
you does not mean that you should win a scholarship. You don't want
to be remembered as the pathetic applicant. You want to be
remembered as the applicant who showed impressive qualities under
difficult circumstances. It is for this reason that essays relating
to this topic are considered among the best. Unless you only use the
horrible experience as a lens with which to magnify your own
personal characteristics, you will not write a good essay.
2. "Diversity" is the biggest buzzword of the
1990's. For this reason, so many applicants are tempted to declare
what makes them diverse. However, simply saying you are a black,
lesbian female will not impress scholarship officers in the least.
While an essay incorporating this information would probably be your
best topic idea, you must finesse the issue by addressing your own
personal qualities and how you overcame stigma, dealt with social
ostracism, etc. If you are a rich student from Beverly Hills whose
father is an engineer and whose mother is a lawyer, but you happen
to be a minority, an essay about how you dealt with adversity would
be unwise. You must demonstrate vividly your personal qualities,
interests, motivations, etc. Address specifically how your diversity
will contribute to the realm of campus opinion, the academic
environment, and the larger society.
3. Don't mention weaknesses unless you absolutely need to
explain them away. You want to make a positive first impression, and
telling a scholarship officer anything about drinking, drugs,
partying, etc. undermines your goal. EssayEdge editors have read
more essays on ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) than we would ever
have imagined. Why admit to weakness when you can instead showcase
your strengths?
4. Be honest, but not for honesty's sake. Unless you are a
truly excellent writer, your best, most passionate writing will be
about events that actually occurred. While you might be tempted to
invent hardship, it is completely unnecessary. Write an essay about
your life that demonstrates your personality.
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